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HannahAllan
Q: Hi thanks for getting back to me, sorry i didnt tell you which courses i am applying for. I am applying for social policy and economics, Business Studies with information management, Accounting and information management, Business Administration with info technology and Business Administration with Services Management.
Answer: Make sure at least the first half is the academic content. Given your course choices, stress specific areas of Business which interest you. Stress also the ICT link - anything you can put down which emphasises your competence in this area is excellent - programming, internet research, word processing, your own website, spreadsheets, whatever. Use very specific examples. On the Spanish point, stress that taking this module demonstrates your versatility - and show that you understand the importance of Spanish as a language used heavily in international business. All a matter of linking everything!

On hobbies, yes - but at the end, and a relatively short paragraph focusing on 2 or 3 that you are really involved in, rather than a long list ('reading, travelling, socialising, etc') that you simply dabble in!

I hope this helps. I'm happy to correct a draft when you have one ready.

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