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Computer Science UCAS Personal Statement

I have done a great deal of rewriting here, and it now reads very much more persuasively. But it is not clear what type of Computer Studies courses you are applying for - you seem particularly interested in building and selling computers, but you should realise that most courses aren't greatly involved with this. So you need near the start to provide very specific details of your skills in the computing area, by making reference to coursework, projects, assigments, etc. and thus to applications you have studied and used, or languages you have mastered, etc. I have left room for you to do this by removing all the unnecessary repetition.
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Computer Science UCAS Personal Statement

The content is quite good, but it is too short. You don't say what subject you are applying for (I assume it is Computer Science)! You must make this clear and outline what exactly attracts you to it. Add your specific Business Studies TOPIC interests, and say something about your hobbies.

I have done a lot of re-writing. Good luck with your application.
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My Computer Science Personal Statement, please recheck it

This reads very well indeed following my earlier amendments. I have touched it up a little more in one or two places, and have removed the numbers of the various Units which aren't necessary and which rather interrrupted the flow of that excellent sentence. I hope you like it; good luck!
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Computer Science UCAS Personal Statement

I have made large numbers of changes to the draft, which now communicates what you want to say much more effectively. Good luck with your application, which I assume is in Computer Science.
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Check my first Computer Science Personal Statement

Certainly the right approach - your enthusiasm comes acrross strongly. Without altering either the substance or the length, I have made substantial changes to the wording, and I hope you like the finished product. Good luck with your application!
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