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International Hospitality Management Personal Statement

This is well written on the whole and the content is good. You have lots to say about yourself which is relevant to your application. Check through for minor errors such as those below:

1. I felt that the course International Hospitality Management [I feel that the International Hospitality Management course]

2. with other people, communication skills, and to learn about business and [communication skills doesn't fit here - you mean the opportunity offers for exercising your communication skills]

3. I am really looking forward to studying this course in greater depth at university and learning more about the subjects I love. [seems to repeat what you've already said]

4. Having been mostly assigned to assist in the running of the kitchen, I had to work hand in hand with other members of staff, under instruction from senior staff, to meet crucial deadlines necessary for the punctual preparation of meals. [overly complex sentence - you're probably trying to pack too much in here]

5. Valentines cards [Valentine's cards] Valentines Day theme [Valentine's Day theme]

6. school[']s high standards

7. consisted of Helping children [helping]

8. Year 12's [Year 12s]

9. along side teachers [alongside]

10. Attending cooking classes while on holiday was an unforgettable experience, which enabled me to cater for my cousins birthday. [no need for a comma after 'experience]

11. employment at a leading Hotel group [hotel]

12. up to Senior Management [senior management]

13. of University life [university life].

Good luck!

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