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Physiotherapy Personal Statement

I have practically rewritten this, so that it now appears in coherent English prose. I have tried to maintain the sense of what you were trying to say, and hope you agree that the revised is more attractive!

Good luck with your application.
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Physiotherapy UCAS Personal Statement

There is a lot of merit in what you have written, and you have assembled quite an impressive range of subject interests and activities. There is scope for adding a little more material in the second paragraph, which at present sounds rather glib. Give a couple of specific examples of your 'practical skills' in Chemistry, and of your particular topic interests in Biology (where I have used the phrase 'human anatomy and physiology'). I have made a fairly large number of changes to the language used in the text, to avoid repetition and to make it flow more smoothly. I hope you like the revised version. Good luck with your application!
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Physiotherapy Personal Statement

I have done a lot of rewriting here. In particular I have tried to make your academic record sound more positive, and I have rejigged most of the phrases and sentences.I have also indicated places where you need to add information - on favourite subject areas and personal\ skills. In the meantime, I hope you like this revised version.
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Physiotherapy Personal Statement 2

This is a good personal statement both in content and form. However, it still needs a little fine tuning.

Notes:

1. From my AS courses I feel I have developed organisational skills by following a 5 AS programme as well as problem solving skill by devising my own methodology for data collection for my geography fieldwork. I am reliable[,]diligent and ....[conscientious?] [this paragraph is incomplete]

2. From my AS courses I feel I have developed organisational skills by following a 5 AS programme as well as problem solving skill by devising my own methodology for data collection for my geography fieldwork. I am reliable diligent and [i think this needs tow separate sentence as the two statements are quite different]

3. me to motivate and choose [me to choose and then motivate?]

4. For as long as I can remember, and . From an early age [a bit repetitive perhaps]

Hope this helps!

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Physiotherapy Personal Statement

Apart from some minor problems, this is a good statement. It is packed with relevant details, sharply focused and to the point. You have lots to mention about yourself and this has been well-structured.

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1. I have been fascinated with the human body[,] in particular locomotion and biomechanics

2. For as long as I can remember, I have been fascinated with the human body in particular locomotion and biomechanics. From an early age I have been interested in the anatomy and physiology of the human body which led to me choosing A levels in Physical Education and Biology [the opening to these two sentence is repetitive in their structure - rewrite to avoid this]

3. of cases that Physiotherapists ]

4. a vital role in the career ['in the career' is a little awkward - leave it out?]

5. . During my observations at various physiotherapy departments[,] I saw a wide range of cases and techniques[,] from cystic fibrosis to dermatology.

Hope this helps!

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