Q: Hiya I am just wondering if it would be possible if some one read through this statement, and make any suggestions in ways 2 improve it. “We’re all making history; just as history has made our world what it is”. Arthur Marwick wrote “because everything has a history as a body of knowledge and as a discipline covers everything” and history is indeed the most inclusive of all intellectual pursuits- its wide range of subject matter is a definite factor in its favour. History can also be a challenging and totally absorbing intellectual exercise, which develops valuable life long skills. I am captivated by the diversity and depth offered by a history degree, attracted by the way it encourages us to be analytical of the values and patterns of past society. I am eager to explore a wider scope of history, as my interests are not just limited to the twentieth century and in particular, am looking forward to the options of studying the Ancient, Medieval and Early modern epochs too. The subject has enhanced my understanding and interest of current affairs and contemporary issues which I enjoy following closely. My interest led to student exchanges to France and Germany, which gave me the opportunity to widen my historical spectrum. I think my commitment is proved by the fact I sat my history examination in June, despite being extremely ill. However, I only managed to complete one of the three papers before being sent home after being sick three times. In addition to a genuine enjoyment of history, I feel that my hardworking and dedicated nature prepares me well for the challenges and discipline required for success at degree level. The nature of my other A-levels complements the study of history. In English Literature I have found the portrayal of attitudes and values presented within texts to be as important as the narrative. Law has extended my analytical and observational skills, assisting with the varied interpretations of history and the original sources on which they are based. Even at this early stage, I can envisage entering the legal profession. It would, of course, be easier to take a law degree in order to step onto the legal train. However my love for history demands that I study it at degree level. In years eleven and twelve respectively, I received the school history and law prizes, for my dedication and contribution to the subjects. Last year I attained an ILM Introductory Certificate. As head barrister, I was an integral part of the team, which took part in the 6th form Citizenship Foundation Bar National Mock Trail Competition. Our team won the London Heat and participated in the National and International finals, which were held at the Old Bailey. As a school senior prefect, I have many responsibilities, such as organising school events, as a senior magazine editor, and as a proactive member of school council. These experiences have taught me to use my own initiative and develop public speaking and diplomacy skills. I have also been involved with the school dramatic performances, having appeared in West Side Story and Abigail’s Party. Playing for various school sport teams, such as rounders, hockey and athletics, has earned me several awards, including Full Colours. The honour of playing for Bromley hockey club and captaining my schools hockey team has taught me the importance of leadership, teamwork, and self-reliance as well as motivational skills. Last year I organised the School’s mixed doubles tennis tournament, of which, my partner and I were runners up. I also found that the experience of assisting special needs pupils, with English and reading development, extremely rewarding. Outside school, I currently work part time for Sainsbury's as a cashier. My managers have received positive feed back from customers, who, on more than one occasion, have telephoned from home to express satisfaction with the service I provide. My success in this role means promotion to supervisor on my eighteenth birthday. Having risen to the academic challenge of sixth form I intend to rise to the greater challenge of university, and I am looking forward to unravelling more of the greatest story ever told, our history.