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There is a lot of merit in what you have written, and you have assembled quite an impressive range of subject interests and activities. There is scope for adding a little more material in the second paragraph, which at present sounds rather glib. Give a couple of specific examples of your 'practical skills' in Chemistry, and of your particular topic interests in Biology (where I have used the phrase 'human anatomy and physiology'). I have made a fairly large number of changes to the language used in the text, to avoid repetition and to make it flow more smoothly.
I hope you like the revised version. Good luck with your application!