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I have gone in for a great deal of revision here. I have removed the more self-congatulatory phrases, which should be left to your referee! I have eliminated the repetition, with a view to creating space for you to insert a new paragraph where I have indicated. As it stands, your PS says nothing about your favourite authors/novels/plays/poems; nor does it offer any detail about your own writing.
Once you have rectified this, and in the light of all my changes, it will be very good.