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UCAS Experts Feedback:
This reads very well, and your enthusiasm, achievement and determination come across strongly. I have made a number of textual changes, particularly in the crucial opening section, but have not changed the content in any way.
I hope you like the revised version, which is attached.
Good luck with your application.