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This is an excellent personal statement. A real sense of your interest in
and your experience of the subject comes through. Some minor amendments
1. By combining both these areas of interest and the Management aspect,
2. enjoyable and [it] opened up options
3. practice my German.[practise - verb/ as opposed to practice - noun]
4. Some Historians regard these novels as Primary sources and so broadening
my historical knowledge. [I would omit this]
Very focused and well-written!