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Medicine Personal Statement

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There is a lot to commend about this statement, and you have clearly worked hard on it. I have made a number of changes in order to improve the flow. These include a change in the order, the addition of an essential concluding paragraph, and a sharper presentation. I have removed some of the more ponderous English; it is now altogether more lively. At one point I have indicated you need to say more about the BENEFITS you derived from work experience. I have created the necessary space by eliminating some of the material in your 'personal interests' section.

You are presumably aware that UCAS opens for Medical Applications (for 2007) on September 1st 2006 and closes on October 15th. There are of course no places for 2006.

Good luck with your application.

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