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This is very good. It is focused, offers range and yet is both concise and precise. Note the following amendments, however.
1. I also enjoy reading, particularly the classics, such as "Pride and Prejudice" and "Jane Eyre". Some historians regard these novels as primary sources and so broadening my historical knowledge.
No other problems - ready for transfer to the form.