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One of the most fascinating PSs I have ever read! You certainly have a way with words, and I can see why Law is your intended destination. Unfortunately your PS is far too long, and I have done a lot of pruning - more yet might be necessary. In particular, I have deleted all the more flowery phrases, since you would run a severe risk of being seen as pretentious. But much of it is quite beautifully written, and I hope you recognise that I have not altered any of your more telling ideas or phrases. The first paragraph (now amended) is, in particular, really impressive.